Which sentence is correct?
Hi everyone! A recruitment agency has informed me that they sent my CV to the client. I want to reply to their email with a note of thanks and a request for updates on my application. Which phrase sounds better: “Please keep me updated on my application progress” or “Please keep me updated as to the status of my application”? Do you have any suggestions for what I could say instead? Thank you!
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First one is bad English and the second one sounds like you’re trying to hard to be smart.
Just a simple “Please keep me updated on any progress with my application”
An alternative is just to say “Please keep me updated on my application status”
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The first sentence is fine. You could word it different if you wished, but it makes sense as it is. The second makes no sense. It should be something like, “I have been forced by him to do that job”
“Please keep me updated at to the status of my application” sounds much better than the other one.
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